Writing\response:
This poem is about a
boy who is five or four who love to play and wished that time would never tick
away, who made me feel that it’s great to be alive.
The boy grows and goes
to college; he is very handsome and strong, who dresses really good, he is very
successful in school.
The boy grows from
child to boy now to an adult. The grown man has very good wealth, while he fights
back attackers from his health. The man leaves, but his heart still lingers on.
I have more understandings
on life and how it can slip away now I’ve read this poem. I have also learned
not to rush living my life. I think this poem connects with me a little because
I would wish that time would never tick away. I would want readers to know that
you only live once and you don’t want to rush living your life.