Tuesday, February 21, 2012

The writting responce


                                        Writing\response:                                                       

This poem is about a boy who is five or four who love to play and wished that time would never tick away, who made me feel that it’s great to be alive.

The boy grows and goes to college; he is very handsome and strong, who dresses really good, he is very successful in school.

The boy grows from child to boy now to an adult. The grown man has very good wealth, while he fights back attackers from his health. The man leaves, but his heart still lingers on.

I have more understandings on life and how it can slip away now I’ve read this poem. I have also learned not to rush living my life. I think this poem connects with me a little because I would wish that time would never tick away. I would want readers to know that you only live once and you don’t want to rush living your life.     




Wednesday, February 15, 2012

The Sonnet "Romona"

I bought a cool kitten from the shelter,
Romona is a black and white kitten.
She loves to play with her toys and feather
she loves to cuddle with my black mittens
she is a funny cat and loves to play;
the cat is small and short in her stature
she also likes to sleep in the soft hay
who's muzzle is white and friendly by nature
she loves to climb up things, like my bedpost.
Romona helps me when I do my homework.
I can not say enough about her I boast
among all felines she is a pleasant quirk
Romona is happy when shes with me.
that's why I think I got an awesome she!